The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one coutry, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one coutry, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.
The data for the use of public transportation for a given country by age group and geography of citizens in 2016 has been illustrated by the given line graphs.
Overall
, higher percentages of local transportation
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been used by the central city residents than the others. When we look at the graph for large city residents, it can be seen that the
middle aged
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working class people have recorded the
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highest
percentage of public transportation use
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65%,
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the least has been recorded by the age group of 61 to 75 which is 10%.
On the other hand
, for the countryside locals, the maximum percentage of public vehicles has been used by
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people in the age range 16 to 30 which is around 25%.
However
, the least consumption has been done by old people above 76 years.
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