The graph below shows the number shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

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given graph illustrates the

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number

of

stores

that ended their

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activities and the

number

of retailers that started their businesses in a particular country from 2011 to 2018.

Overall

, with

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the exception

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of some

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fluctuations

that these two trends have experienced in

this

time frame, both of them showed a downward

trend

.

According to

the

number

of closures that

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happened, in the first

year

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a slight decrease can be observed in

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figure

whereas

during the next

year

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this

number

increased by more than 7000 and

then

again,

this

trend

has become reversed. Over the next

2-years

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2 years

,

firstly

this

number

plummeted

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down

done

from about 6500

stores

to less than 1000

stores

but again it rocketed up to 5000

stores

.

Moreover

, the

number

of shops that

stoped

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to

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work remained relatively steady and stood at around 5000. Moving into the

number

of shops that started their

works

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during

this

time frame, their

number

significantly decreased in 2011 to 4000

then

this

trend

has

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reversed and the

number

of openings increased significantly from 4000 in 2012 to about 6000 in 2014.

Subsecuently

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Subsequently

, with

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of two years that

this

trend

remained unchanged again started to reduce from 4000 in 2017 to 3000 in 2018.