The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.

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The given 2 images illustrate the current situation of a commercial place and the planning for its

future

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renovation happening in a town called Norbiton.

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, we observe currently the industrial area has only one roundabout, alongside is occupied by 8 factories.

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, after the map, we see there are two roundabouts and factories are replaced with houses

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the addition of facilitations i.e., a playground and a school, etc., are observed. If we compare the now and later picture, we will come across a lot of development

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as, presently on the north side we see farmland next to the river.

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, in the East, there are several factories in front of one another. Now, for

future

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renovation projects, there are numerous changes observed.

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, the river is cut into two, and a

road

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is made there which leads to a large house located in the north and the south joins with the circular

road

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, a lot of new facilities (Shops, Medical

centers

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, Playgrounds, and Schools) are

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to be witnessed which are not present now. Currently, in the south, there is a straight

road

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, but in the

future

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, that

road

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will be changed into a small roundabout to overcome traffic issues. In short,

future

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development seem to change the industrial area into a living community.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words future, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

221 words

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