The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.

The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.
The given 2 images illustrate the current situation of a commercial place and the planning for its
future
renovation happening in a town called Norbiton.
Overall
, we observe currently the industrial area has only one roundabout, alongside is occupied by 8 factories.
However
, after the map, we see there are two roundabouts and factories are replaced with houses
as well as
the addition of facilitations i.e., a playground and a school, etc., are observed. If we compare the now and later picture, we will come across a lot of development
such
as, presently on the north side we see farmland next to the river.
Whereas
, in the East, there are several factories in front of one another. Now, for
future
renovation projects, there are numerous changes observed.
For instance
, the river is cut into two, and a
road
is made there which leads to a large house located in the north and the south joins with the circular
road
.
Furthermore
, a lot of new facilities (Shops, Medical
centers
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, Playgrounds, and Schools) are
also
to be witnessed which are not present now. Currently, in the south, there is a straight
road
, but in the
future
, that
road
will be changed into a small roundabout to overcome traffic issues. In short,
future
development seem to change the industrial area into a living community.
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