some people say that the best way to reduce carime rates is to increase the number of police and the streets to what extent to agree or disagree?

Unfortunately, recently, we have witnessed an

increasie

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in

the

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crime

rates.it is suggested that

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police

officers is the

best contributing

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factor to

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the rate of

crime

in an urban area .there are contrasting views about the decision which will be discussed in the following essay. No one would deny the positive effects of

police

presence on the streets.

First,

they can control some important

crimes

,

such

as shoplifting, pickpocketing, burglarizing, and so on. But, some

crimes

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controlled by

police

presence

on

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that moment .

for example

, bank robbery.

On the other hand

, if citizens always control the

crimes

by

police

, people will never understand the laws.

As a result

of

this

situation decreasing the

crime

rate

are

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not stop I believe that juvenile delinquents must be educated

for

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the consequences

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their actions.

moreover

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many contributing factors can lead to

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,in the

crime

rate ,including lack of education which

are

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rooted in

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childhood. In conclusion ,

police

officer presence on the street is a solution for reducing

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crime

.but,I believe that it's not the best way.I think that government should raise

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awareness about the consequences of committing

crimes

.

also

,

crime

prevention needs serious and organized measures and authorities must be aware of the reason for delinquent

behavior

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which originates from childhood.