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some people say that the best way to reduce carime rates is to increase the number of police and the streets to what extent to agree or disagree?

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Unfortunately, recently, we have witnessed an
increasie
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increase
 in
the
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crime
 rates.it is suggested that
rasing
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police
 officers is the
best contributing
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 factor to
decrease
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 the rate of
crime
 in an urban area .there are contrasting views about the decision which will be discussed in the following essay. No one would deny the positive effects of
police
 presence on the streets.
First,
they can control some important
crimes
,
such
 as shoplifting, pickpocketing, burglarizing, and so on. But, some
crimes
unable
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 controlled by
police
 presence
on
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at
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 that moment .
for example
, bank robbery.
On the other hand
, if citizens always control the
crimes
 by
police
, people will never understand the laws.
As a result
 of
this
 situation decreasing the
crime
 rate
are
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 not stop I believe that juvenile delinquents must be educated
for
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about
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 the consequences
for
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of
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 their actions.
moreover
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 many contributing factors can lead to
increase
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,in the
crime
 rate ,including lack of education which
are
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 rooted in
some one’s
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someone’s
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 childhood. In conclusion ,
police
 officer presence on the street is a solution for reducing
the
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crime
.but,I believe that it's not the best way.I think that government should raise
the
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awareness about the consequences of committing
crimes
.
also
,
crime
 prevention needs serious and organized measures and authorities must be aware of the reason for delinquent
behavior
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behaviour
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 which originates from childhood.
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