The Charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie
chart
provides information about the world’s water
usage
in several portions, while
the bar chart
shows as same contents but in selected countries. Both were taken in the year 2000 and the units are given in percentage
.
Overall
, it is notable that the world’s most water
usage
field is agriculture, however
, when it comes to the various countries, agriculture does not have the highest percentage
for every country.
As can be seen from the table, according to
the pie chart
, agriculture’s water
usage
has the highest percentage
, 70%, followed by industry’s usage
which is 22%. On the contrary
, domestic’s water
usage
has the lowest proportion at 8% which is three times lower than industry.
Turning to the bar chart
, India has the most agricultural water
usage
which is almost 100%, followed by China’s, nearly 70%, whereas
Canada’s agricultural water
usage
significantly figured out the lowest percentage
at 8%.
On the contrary
, India’s industrial usage
has the lowest at 3%, but Canada’s usage
of industry is the highest at 80%.
Interestingly, New Zealand’s first usage
field is domestic, which is 46%, whereas
most of the other countries have the very lowest percentage
like 9, 5, and 12%.Submitted by ehlight22 on
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