The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making clothes from plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates information about the various steps involved in the process of
water
treatment.
Overall
it is clear that
the process of purifying
water
involves a total of ten steps
whereas
this
linear process commences with
water
intake from screens and culminates in the faucet.
Firstly
,
water
is intake from big reservoirs with the help of screens and
then
pumps into sealed pipes in the third step flash mix
water
is mixed with Polyaluminium Chloride and additional oxidants
then
water
is passed to the next two steps flocculation and setting basin all the dirt and impurities are extracted from the
water
. In the sixth phase,chlorine is added to the
water
to kill all bacteria and
then
in the next step
water
passes through a filter membrane
then
after Disinfection of
water
with Chlorine,Sodium Hydroxide and Fluorides, the
water
is pumped to the faucet
then
clean and pure is used by humans for domestic uses.
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