The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph represents information about the annual
income
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of three bakeries in Calgary, from 2000-2010.
Overall
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, the yearly
income
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of
Amandine
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Bakery
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tended to increase enormously.
By contrast
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, the annual earnings of those in
Mari
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Bakeshop were turned down continuously. In
Bolo
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Cakery
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, the annual
income
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slightly increased. From 2000 to 2003, the yearly
income
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of
Bolo
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Cakery
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rose to almost 40000
dollars
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.
Conversely
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, the
income
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of those in
Mari
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Bakery
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started at 80000 in 2000, and slightly increased for the next year but still remains at 80000
dollars
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in 2003. The
income
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of
Amandine
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Bakery
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remained stable at almost 6000
dollars
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from 2000 to 2003. From 2003 to 2005, the yearly earnings of
Bolo
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Cakery
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and
Amandine
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Bakery
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remained stable, accounting for almost 40000
dollars
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and almost 60000
dollars
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in order. In
Mari
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Bakeshop the
income
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fluctuated and decreased to 60000
dollars
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in 2010. From 2005 to 2008, the
income
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of
Amandine
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Bakery
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and
Bolo
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Cakery
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increased extremely, accounting for 100000
dollars
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and 60000
dollars
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in order.
However
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, the earnings in those of
Mari
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Bakeshop decreased dramatically to 40000 in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, amandine, bakery, mari, bolo, cakery, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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