The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents information about the annual
income
of three bakeries in Calgary, from 2000-2010.
Overall
, the yearly
income
of
Amandine
Bakery
tended to increase enormously.
By contrast
, the annual earnings of those in
Mari
Bakeshop were turned down continuously. In
Bolo
Cakery
, the annual
income
slightly increased. From 2000 to 2003, the yearly
income
of
Bolo
Cakery
rose to almost 40000
dollars
.
Conversely
, the
income
of those in
Mari
Bakery
started at 80000 in 2000, and slightly increased for the next year but still remains at 80000
dollars
in 2003. The
income
of
Amandine
Bakery
remained stable at almost 6000
dollars
from 2000 to 2003. From 2003 to 2005, the yearly earnings of
Bolo
Cakery
and
Amandine
Bakery
remained stable, accounting for almost 40000
dollars
and almost 60000
dollars
in order. In
Mari
Bakeshop the
income
fluctuated and decreased to 60000
dollars
in 2010. From 2005 to 2008, the
income
of
Amandine
Bakery
and
Bolo
Cakery
increased extremely, accounting for 100000
dollars
and 60000
dollars
in order.
However
, the earnings in those of
Mari
Bakeshop decreased dramatically to 40000 in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, amandine, bakery, mari, bolo, cakery, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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