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Many parents send their children on educational trips inside and outside of their country. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays days, more kids are being encouraged by their parents to go on study tours both in the country and abroad. The outcome of
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 trips can have both positive and negative impacts. In the essay, I will try to explain both views. There are two major advantages of educational travel.
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, during the trip, they will get opportunities to explore a new world which will make them learn about new cultures and aspects.
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, a student can learn at least some new language to cope with his routine
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 if he is at another location.
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 will be beneficial for them in many future situations.
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, young students can be more confident and socialize. Like, by making new friends they can learn to express feelings of discomfort, adjustment etc. A more confident person can lead to a better future.
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 some negative prospect for educational trips. Mainly, education tours involve high costs of value especially, foreign education tours. In spite of the strong willingness of middle-class parents who can not afford them.
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 needs to think about student safety when they are away. It is a major concern for the guardian about their children's security in terms of racism and political instability.
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, on the base of above the ideas, educational trips make younger
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 kids explore new views and offer to build confidence.
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 the involvement of high cost and security can not be omitted. By considering the pros and cons it is advisable for parents to
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 their own
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 in favour of their kids.

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