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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early stage. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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It is argued that
children
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 should be learned to distinguish between good and bad
things
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 at their younger stage and particular
punishments
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 are vital to understand and learning about their distinction. I totally disagree with the statement and the essay would discuss how
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 are impacted physically and mentally, break down the connections between parents and teachers, and may be addicted to doing the same faults again and again.
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, the essay will discuss, the kinds of
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 recommended to allow to teach better behaviour to
children
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. On the one hand, there are 3 main reasons to disagree with the above state.
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, some
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 will be impacted their personality and mindset
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 some people punishing their
children
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 in front of others. It is completely wrong because those child /
children
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 will become shy and inconvenienced to face others. Sometimes, it may lead to a break of relationships or connections between parents and teachers respectively.
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, some
children
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 adhere to doing wrong
things
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 numerously.
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,
children
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 in Sri Lanka tend to do wrong
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 in 2022 is considerably higher than in 2021 and researchers are predicted, it will be increasing gradually because of the unawareness of parents and teachers.
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, qualified Psychologists should be involved to regular the situation.
On the other hand
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, there are several
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 that can be given to
children
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 to understand and learn their faults. One of them is advised. It is a minor punishment and if some person wants to give
advice
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 to their
children
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, it should be done privately. The other one is severe
advice
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.
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, if someone does not learn through
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,
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 follow severe
advice
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. If below 5 years old, make a place name a naughty corner and if you want to punish them, keep them in that place for several minutes. These kinds of
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 are recommended to use good behaviour in
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. In conclusion, society should be aware of
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 and follow these
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, if they want to punish.
According to
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 that, we can save
children
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 from bad
things
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.
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