It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early stage. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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It is argued that

children

should be learned to distinguish between good and bad

things

at their younger stage and particular

punishments

are vital to understand and learning about their distinction. I totally disagree with the statement and the essay would discuss how

punishments

are impacted physically and mentally, break down the connections between parents and teachers, and may be addicted to doing the same faults again and again.

Additionally

, the essay will discuss, the kinds of

punishments

recommended to allow to teach better behaviour to

children

. On the one hand, there are 3 main reasons to disagree with the above state.

Firstly

, some

punishments

will be impacted their personality and mindset

due to

some people punishing their

children

in front of others. It is completely wrong because those child /

children

will become shy and inconvenienced to face others. Sometimes, it may lead to a break of relationships or connections between parents and teachers respectively.

Finally

, some

children

adhere to doing wrong

things

numerously.

For example

children

in Sri Lanka tend to do wrong

things

in 2022 is considerably higher than in 2021 and researchers are predicted, it will be increasing gradually because of the unawareness of parents and teachers.

Hence

, qualified Psychologists should be involved to regular the situation.

On the other hand

, there are several

punishments

that can be given to

children

to understand and learn their faults. One of them is advised. It is a minor punishment and if some person wants to give

advice

to their

children

, it should be done privately. The other one is severe

advice

For instance

, if someone does not learn through

advice

then

follow severe

advice

. If below 5 years old, make a place name a naughty corner and if you want to punish them, keep them in that place for several minutes. These kinds of

punishments

are recommended to use good behaviour in

children

. In conclusion, society should be aware of

this

and follow these

punishments

, if they want to punish.

According to

that, we can save

children

from bad

things

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