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I believe working in a reputable university like yours will provide me with an excellent opportunity for my career. I would truly be grateful if I finally get selected for that post, and I will prove myself to be an important asset for your university through my dedication, sincerity, and highest level of professionalism.

#university #opportunity #career #post #asset #dedication #sincerity #level #professionalism
I like to introduce myself as a candidate for
CSE
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the CSE
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 lecturer
position
 in response to the advertisement
publish
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 on bdjobs.com dated 25th May 2023. I
have
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applied on
28th
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the 28th
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 of May through my bdjobs account. I have completed my
Bachelor
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Bachelor's
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 from Ahsanullah
University
 of Science and Technology (AUST)
concentration
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concentrating
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on
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in
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 CSE and acquired CGPA
3.58
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of 3.58
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 (5th
Position
). I
also
 completed my postgraduate from London South Bank
University
 (LSBU) though my major was networking. I secured 3rd
position
 with a Merit grade. I worked as a CSE lecturer
in
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at
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World
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the World
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University
 of Bangladesh (WUB). Apart from that I
also
 worked as an accredited lecturer for
University
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the University
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 of Debry (UoD) and Leeds Trinity
University
 (LTU) yet the delivering venue was BAC International Study Centre (Dhaka).
Besides
the
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apply
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teaching
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,teaching
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 I have
concentration
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concentrated
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 on research too and publish three research papers. My research areas include Machine Learning, Natural Language Processing and Deep Learning. Working at a prestigious institution like yours, in my opinion, will give me a great opportunity for my career. If I am
finally
 chosen for that
position
, I would be sincerely appreciative, and I would demonstrate that I will be a valuable contribution to your
university
by
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through
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 my commitment, sincerity, and
highest
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the highest
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caliber
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calibre
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 of professionalism.
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