Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Rich
countries
support people who are forced to flee their homes overseas and provide them with essential aid. This
essay completely agrees that developed countries
should accept immigrants because they will bring unique knowledge and skill sets and enrich the local culture.
Every country has something that makes its people unique. Refugees bring with them exceptional skills like culinary arts, trade, and technical skills that will help improve the overall
abilities of the local labor
force. These skills can be shared and help boost the country's economy. Change the spelling
labour
For example
, the revenue of BCG can rise by up to 19% in organizations since this
company has employees from diverse backgrounds and nations.
The refugees help make host nations' cultures more diverse and enrich social and humanitarian values by projecting multiculturalism into the host societies. It helps locals appreciate cultural diversity and see the shared values and beliefs in different cultures. Multiculturalism is perhaps an ideal model for attracting talented labor
to a nation, city, or organization. Change the spelling
labour
For example
, Nations such
as Australia, Canada, and Singapore have historically produced economic growth by accepting immigration.
In conclusion, Developed countries
should embrace immigrants and provide fundamental support since refugees can improve national revenue and countries
economies through their knowledge and diversity of cultures.Change noun form
countries'
country's
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