Some students take one year off between finishing school and goin to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantage outweigh disadvantages?
There is denying
fact
that the Add an article
the fact
phenomena
of taking a year off after completing school and moving to University for Fix the agreement mistake
phenomenon
travelling
or for work Replace the word
travel
is
ubiquitous across the globe Change the verb form
are
due to
It's
importance. Replace the word
Its
Majority
of folks are in Correct article usage
The majority
the
favour of Correct article usage
apply
this
statement due to
its number of merits. However
some of the people highlight its demerits first. In my.Add a comma
,However
further
paragraphs advantages
and disadvantages of the same will be discussed.
Initiating Correct article usage
the advantages
with
the benefits of the same, the first and foremost key benefit is that he can utilise to explore the world. Change preposition
apply
For
example
he can go to different countries and can learn about Add a comma
,example
there
culture, heritage and language. By using the gap he can Correct your spelling
their
also
explore his country for knowing his country deeply. Another benefit which can strike the minds of people can be that by doing part-time
job or Correct article usage
a part-time
full time
job Add a hyphen
full-time
he
can save money for Correct pronoun usage
they
his
Correct pronoun usage
apply
further
education. To cite an example a student can work in a restaurant, supermarket or in a store.By earning money a student can support his family financially and physically.
On It's
darker side some of the drawbacks which Correct your spelling
Its
makes
it problematic are first a year gap may affect Correct subject-verb agreement
make
to
his studies. Change preposition
apply
For
instance
he was not attending any classes or doing his homework etc.That's why he might not feel like Add a comma
,instance
study
again Wrong verb form
studying
secondly
if he starts earning money education may semm
unimportant. That's why it might Correct your spelling
seem
be seem
that a year gap can destroy Change the verb form
seem
students
educational life
In conclusion to the above statement, neither its pros Change noun form
students'
student's
can
be neglected nor its cons. It is a mixed bag of positives and negatives. In my opinion, the statement should not be underestimatedCorrect word choice
nor can
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