The two maps below show road access to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the changes that take place in the
neighborhood
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of the
City
Hospital between 2007 and 2010.
According to
the map of 2007, the
City
Hospital was surrounded by the Ring
Road
. There was the Hospital
Road
going to the south from the Ring
Road
and joined the
City
Road
which was from east to west.
In addition
, along
the
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Hospital
Road
was
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were
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six bus stops,
while
the
Car
park
that
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apply
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was for both staff and
public
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the public
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located
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was located
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at
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on
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the east side of it. In 2010, the
City
Hospital and
main
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the main
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three roads remain basically the same, but two roundabouts were added at the two junctions of the main three roads. The six bus stops were removed
while
the new bus station
were
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was
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builded
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built
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at
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on
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the west side of
the
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Hospital
Road
.
Furthermore
, the old
car
park
was changed to the staff
car
park
and another Public
car
park
was added
in
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on
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the east side of the
City
Hospital.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road, car, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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