The two maps below show road access to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the changes that take place in the
neighborhood
of the Change the spelling
neighbourhood
City
Hospital between 2007 and 2010.
According to
the map of 2007, the City
Hospital was surrounded by the Ring Road
. There was the Hospital Road
going to the south from the Ring Road
and joined the City
Road
which was from east to west. In addition
, along the
Hospital Correct article usage
apply
Road
was
six bus stops, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
the Car
park
that
was for both staff and Correct pronoun usage
apply
public
Correct article usage
the public
located
Add a missing verb
was located
at
the east side of it.
In 2010, the Change preposition
on
City
Hospital and main
three roads remain basically the same, but two roundabouts were added at the two junctions of the main three roads. The six bus stops were removed Correct article usage
the main
while
the new bus station were
Change the verb form
was
builded
Correct your spelling
built
at
the west side of Change preposition
on
the
Hospital Correct article usage
apply
Road
. Furthermore
, the old car
park
was changed to the staff car
park
and another Public car
park
was added in
the east side of the Change preposition
on
City
Hospital.Submitted by BeckyJ on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road, car, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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