THE CHART SHOWS THE NUMBER OF WORKING HOURS PER WEEK, IN INDUSTRIAL SECTOR, IN 4 EUROPEAN COUNTRIES IN 2002
The bar charts depict a comprehensive
comparsion
of the percentage of workers with working Correct your spelling
comparison
hours
per Use synonyms
week
in 4 different Use synonyms
european
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European
country
, in Change to a plural noun
countries
industrial
field, in 2002.
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the industrial
Overall
, in 3 countries, the majority of individuals spent the highest time Linking Words
of
working at 36-40 Change preposition
apply
hours
per Use synonyms
week
Use synonyms
whereas
the other labourers spread widely in several range of working Linking Words
hours
.
Upon observation, In Use synonyms
denmak
, the dominant proportion of people who worked Correct your spelling
Denmark
at
36-40 Change preposition
apply
hours
per Use synonyms
week
Use synonyms
around
70%. Both Add a missing verb
was around
sweden
and the UK had the same pattern Change the capitalization
Sweden
to
Change preposition
as
denmak
where Change the capitalization
Denmak
laborers
consumed 36-40 Change the spelling
labourers
hours
per Use synonyms
week
around 80% and 50%, respectively. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, France was commanded by Linking Words
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an employe
employe
who used 31-35 Correct your spelling
employee
hour
per Fix the agreement mistake
hours
week
with a range Use synonyms
approximately
a half.
Shifting to Change preposition
of approximately
others
explanations,Change noun form
others'
other's
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