the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of noutrientd, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
the pie charts show the average percentage of nutrients present in typical everyday meals
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suggesting their negative effects if consumed too much.
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overall
, the shared information indicates that dinner items are comprised of higher levels of sodium and fat Linking Words
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snacks contain vast amounts of added Linking Words
sugar
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, in the morning breakfast, all mentioned nutrients are equally available in the food, which is around 16% each. Linking Words
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, the amount takes a paradigm shift at lunch when the sodium level is at its peak ( around 30%) Linking Words
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the added Linking Words
sugar
is 10 Use synonyms
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this
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likewise
, dinners contain the highest sodium proportion, accounting for 43%, Linking Words
whereas
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sugar
is only present at 23%. Use synonyms
on the other hand
, snacks are made of almost 50 Linking Words
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
sugar
than any other food component.Use synonyms
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