In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Home
and Rent
Nowadays, the rents in this
generation are more expansive
Correct your spelling
expensive than
then
before in most countries. However
, owning a home
is much better then
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than
rent
and Wrong verb form
renting
pay
every single Wrong verb form
paying
month
, and I totally agree that this
is a positive siltation. I would like to approve some reasons in the following graph.
Firstly
, owning a house is very important, the reason why is when people
owning
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own
home
their
will be no need to pay every Replace the word
there
month
for a rent
. While
,
renting must have to pay every Remove the comma
apply
month
. For example
, before five years my father bought a
own house for only 430,000 riyals. After that, we Change the word
his
didn't pay nothing
becauseRewrite the sentence
didn't pay anything
paid nothing
,
the Remove the comma
apply
home
is our own. In addition
, Thats
why Correct your spelling
That's
people
must have or try to own a home
much faster they
could.
Correct word choice
than they
Secondly
, in general
the rents now are getting more expensive with Add a comma
,general
these development
are happing in KSA Change the determiner
this development
such
as,
Neom, the Line project, and the new tall buildings Remove the comma
apply
will
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that will
be build
. Even so, the government will increase the payments to have more money. As well, it will began more difficult to pay for the Change the verb form
be built
rent
every month
. For example
, my married sister are
paying 5000 riyals for her Change the verb form
is
home
rent
. However
, often this
is extravagance and self-pity.
Finally
, there are more positives for owning home
. Add an article
a home
Also
,their
are large benefits for Replace the word
there
people
. Public
must awareness what will happen in the future and avoid renting. Add an article
The public
Furthermore
, future prices are getting high even. On top of that, people
will struggle from
renting.Change preposition
with
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