In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Home
and
Rent
Nowadays, the rents in
this
generation are more
expansive
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expensive than
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then
before in most countries.
However
, owning a
home
is much better
then
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than
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rent
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renting
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and
pay
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paying
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every single
month
, and I totally agree that
this
is a positive siltation. I would like to approve some reasons in the following graph.
Firstly
, owning a house is very important, the reason why is when
people
owning
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own
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a
home
their
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there
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will be no need to pay every
month
for a
rent
.
While
,
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apply
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renting must have to pay every
month
.
For example
, before five years my father bought
a
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his
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own house for only 430,000 riyals. After that, we
didn't pay nothing
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didn't pay anything
paid nothing
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because
,
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the
home
is our own.
In addition
,
Thats
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That's
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why
people
must have or try to own a
home
much faster
they
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than they
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could.
Secondly
, in
general
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,general
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the rents now are getting more expensive with
these development
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this development
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are happing in KSA
such
as
,
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Neom, the Line project, and the new tall buildings
will
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that will
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be build
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be built
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. Even so, the government will increase the payments to have more money. As well, it will began more difficult to pay for the
rent
every
month
.
For example
, my married sister
are
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is
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paying 5000 riyals for her
home
rent
.
However
, often
this
is extravagance and self-pity.
Finally
, there are more positives for owning
home
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a home
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.
Also
,
their
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there
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are large benefits for
people
.
Public
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The public
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must awareness what will happen in the future and avoid renting.
Furthermore
, future prices are getting high even. On top of that,
people
will struggle
from
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with
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renting.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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