The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart gives data on the average weekly spending of families of a certain nation in the years 1968 and 2018.
overall
, from the information, more money was spent on food per week, second to housing, clothing and footwear but it took a different turn after 4 decades, where more funds were for leisure, Linking Words
then
shelter before food.
In 1968, household expenses were mainly on nourishment, which was at the rate of 35%, next to 10% each spent on structure, clothes and shoes respectively, Linking Words
then
other working weeks spending Linking Words
such
as transportation, household Linking Words
goods
, leisure, personal Use synonyms
goods
, fuel and power, falls below 10%.
Use synonyms
Conversely
, in 2018, there was a significant decrease of about 15.5% in cash used for meals every seven days, Linking Words
then
a sharp rise of above 20% expenditure was for vacations, next was about 18% use for shelter, Linking Words
while
15% for transport. Household Linking Words
goods
remained the same at around 8% in both years, Use synonyms
while
others ( personal Linking Words
goods
, fuel and power) fall within the range of 0-5%.Use synonyms
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