You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter in regard to my disappointing experience at the airport services
helpdesk
. I travelled From
Paris
to London on the economy on 15th July 2023 with British Airways. the travel was smooth and comfortable.
However
, I am disappointed with the airport service
helpdesk
services. They
are
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not updated on flights departure for
Paris
and on top of ,that they were rude too. I was really shocked to learn that they don't have any idea about the departure schedule for
Paris
. I would like to suggest a few suggestions to improve the airport service
helpdesk
. please train your staff in demeanour and acquaint them with flight schedules for
Paris
flights .
Furthermore
, make sure all details are available on their computers.so that they can pull out necessary information whenever there is a need to do that. that will make the
helpdesk
efficient and quick . looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully Jason Micheal
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The letter effectively addresses the main points required in the task prompt.
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The logical structure of the letter is clear and follows a standard format. However, the greeting and closing could be more formal and appropriate for a business letter.

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