Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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producing
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for
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to
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country
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the country
national
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the national
economy
, Use synonyms
provdie
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provide
reliable
source of Correct article usage
a reliable
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, and local Use synonyms
food
inexpensive.
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To begin
with, there are several reasons why I believe Linking Words
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country
should try to produce all the Add an article
the country
a country
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for its population and import as little Use synonyms
food
as possible. Use synonyms
Firtsly
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Firstly
produce
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producing
food
locally can Use synonyms
boosts
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boost
local
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the local
economy
. Use synonyms
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is because Correct your spelling
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producing
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supports
support
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supports
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that
who
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that
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such
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mean
local companies will earn more money from Correct subject-verb agreement
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sell
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selling
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apply
contribute
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contributes
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the local
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. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
produce
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producing
food
locally can create employment opportunities and income for local people. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
thousand
of people will work in local Correct your spelling
thousands
food
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factores
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factories
factors
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, engineers, and drivers for Change preposition
apply
truck
, which Fix the agreement mistake
trucks
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this
can contribute to Correct pronoun usage
apply
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rate of poverty among local residents.
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a higher
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produce
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producing
food
locally can Use synonyms
provdie
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provide
food
security for Use synonyms
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country
. Add an article
the country
This
is because Linking Words
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country
will become more independent on Add an article
the country
themselve
to produce their own Correct your spelling
themselves
food
. Use synonyms
For example
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had
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food
supply Correct article usage
the food
on
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by Use synonyms
themselve
. Correct your spelling
itself
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food
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food
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country
. Add an article
the country
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is because local Linking Words
food
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often
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, which Use synonyms
mean
more people can purchase local Correct subject-verb agreement
means
food
.
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To sum up
, I completely think Linking Words
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country
should try to produce all the Add an article
the country
food
for its population and import as little Use synonyms
food
as possible because Use synonyms
produce
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producing
food
locally Use synonyms
bring
many merits for Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
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country
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the country
including
, Verb problem
apply
support
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including supporting
local
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the local
economy
, Use synonyms
provide
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providing
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security, and Use synonyms
increase
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increasing
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the availability
food
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