In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some nations, companies have been allowing people to perform their jobs from their
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. That,
however
, is not a consensus, as in other places people are still expected to attend the
office
to
work
. It is my opinion that both alternatives have their advantages
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and that
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hybrid model is probably the ideal one. Since the COVID-19 pandemic, several companies have been
alowing
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allowing
their employees to
work
from
home
. That saves time, since people do not need to commute to the
office
, and is
also
much more
confortable
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comfortable
for many workers
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since they are closer to their families. When working from
home
,
for example
, mothers and fathers may be able to look over their children during the
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day
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they would have to be out in the city centre. There are,
however
, different views on
this
topic.
Firstly
, bosses and CEOs have said that adopting a full
home
office
model would affect the
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ability in their squads.
Secondly
, even workers have expressed that the change had caused them problems. Some do not have
confortable
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comfortable
places to
work
from
home
,
while
others just feel
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lonely
without the
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daily
work
interactions. To
sumarise
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summarise
summarize
,
thus
, it is my opinion that both views have their merits. For that reason, I believe that a solution that combines some days working from
home
with some days at the
office
would be the best way to move
foward
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forward
.
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