The chart below shows how frequently people in the usa ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013
The illustration gives information about the frequency of eating fast
food
in US restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Overall
,the percentage
of people
who ate fast food
in daily life had low value to those who ate once or twice a month.
It is quite evident from the bar chart that the percentage
of people
who ate daily basis fast food
at restaurants had a minimum value in 2013 but in 2006 the percentage
of people
that ate fast food
several times a week had increased. In contrast
, the percentage
of people
who ate fast food
once a week apply increased gradually in 2013.
Furthermore
,the percentage
of people
who ate fast food
once or twice a month apply increased in 2013. But the percentage
of people
who ate fast food
a few times a year apply decreased in 2014. , the percentage
of people
who ate fast food
never had
increased in 2003Unnecessary verb
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