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More and more people in developing countries puraches cars for the first time what are problem causes and what are the solutions

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In modern days the demand for
cars
 has significantly increased.
This
 leads to
climate
change
 and
traffic
 congestion. those problems can be handled by using electric
cars
 and making some changes in the infrastructure.
However
, purchasing
cars
 in developing countries reflects modernization, it hurts them, As it causes
climate
change
. Carbon dioxide produced by
cars
 leads to the
decation
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decoration
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 of the ozone layer, which causes
increase
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an increase
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to
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in
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the
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temperatures.
For example
, the demand
of
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for
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cars
 in Egypt has increased
during
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from
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 the 19centry until now, and Egyptians now suffering from high temperatures.
In addition
, it leads to
traffic
 congestion. There are many people
depend
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who depend
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 on them to go to their
works
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work
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, so the
roads
 become crowded, especially in Cairo and Alex. The first solution to those problems is to substitute
the
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traditional
cars
by
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with
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 electrical
once
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ones
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,
this
 will reduce the environmental consumption of carbon dioxide, and cut down the
climate
change
. The second solution is to make the
roads
 suitable for other transportation as bikes. The
traffic
 will decline, as there will be 2 types of
roads
, one for
cars
 other for cycles. Those really what happened in many developed countries
such
 as Netherlands and Belgium,
Therefore
, third nations countries should copy
this
 solution to it In conclusion, buying
cars
 in developing nations causes some
damages
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damage
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 to it
such
 as
climate
change
 and
traffic
 lights. To tackle it they can use Tesla
cars
 rather than traditional ones and doing some changes
in
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roads
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the roads
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