More and more people in developing countries puraches cars for the first time what are problem causes and what are the solutions

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In modern days the demand for
cars
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has significantly increased.
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leads to
climate
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change
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and
traffic
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congestion. those problems can be handled by using electric
cars
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and making some changes in the infrastructure.
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, purchasing
cars
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in developing countries reflects modernization, it hurts them, As it causes
climate
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change
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. Carbon dioxide produced by
cars
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leads to the
decation
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decoration
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of the ozone layer, which causes
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to
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the
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temperatures.
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, the demand
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cars
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in Egypt has increased
during
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the 19centry until now, and Egyptians now suffering from high temperatures.
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, it leads to
traffic
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congestion. There are many people
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who depend
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on them to go to their
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, so the
roads
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become crowded, especially in Cairo and Alex. The first solution to those problems is to substitute
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traditional
cars
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by
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with
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electrical
once
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ones
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,
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will reduce the environmental consumption of carbon dioxide, and cut down the
climate
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change
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. The second solution is to make the
roads
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suitable for other transportation as bikes. The
traffic
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will decline, as there will be 2 types of
roads
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, one for
cars
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other for cycles. Those really what happened in many developed countries
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as Netherlands and Belgium,
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, third nations countries should copy
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solution to it In conclusion, buying
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in developing nations causes some
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to it
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as
climate
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change
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and
traffic
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lights. To tackle it they can use Tesla
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rather than traditional ones and doing some changes
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