The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.
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The graphs
illustrates
the Change the verb form
illustrate
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younger
activities
such
as ;cultural and leisure activities
that the boys
and girls
do in their childhood.
Firtly
, they both Correct your spelling
First
enjoying
listening to music Wrong verb form
enjoyed
however
a dramatically larger number of girls
liked reading. There were also
many differences in terms of the children's preferred sports.
It is crystal clear that,
there are some differences between these two charts.Remove the comma
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Overall
, when we scrutinize the boys
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boy's
boys'
activities
chart we can clearly see that in their leasure
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leisure
time
they are playing basketball soccer and skateboarding Add a comma
,time
additionally
they are listening
music and play computer games too. Add the preposition
tolistening
On the other hand
; they also
read books to improve their culture.
When we taking
a closer look at the second chart, Wrong verb form
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girls
do dancing more than other activities
in their leisure time on top of that they do gymnastics and netball as well. Furthermore
,they play computer games like boys
and reading
more books than Wrong verb form
read
boys
.Listenin
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Listening
Listen in
Listenin'
music
is the least popular Change preposition
to music
activities
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activity
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among
girls
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