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Some people say that it is the responsibility of the citizens to take care of the environment. While others say that it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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Some individuals say that it is the responsibility of the citizens to look after
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the ecosystem .
Whereas
 others say that it is the authority that should take care of the
environment
. In my opinion, the government is completely responsible to protect
environment
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the environment
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 because they have
power
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the power
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 to promote regulations and
rasie
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raise
 awareness among
public
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the public
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. On the one hand, some believe individuals
are have
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responsibility
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a responsibility
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 to protect
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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.
This
 is because citizens can use public transport
instead
 of private vehicles in
order
 to
mtigate
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mitigate
 Co2 footprint.
Furthermore
,
people
 can reduce their consumption of goods in
order
 to
mtigate
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mitigate
waste
.
In addition
, citizens can recycle their goods as much as possible in
order
 to alleviate
waste
.
On the other hand
, I would like to agree with those
people
 who believe
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 after
environment
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the environment
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 is
responsibility
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the responsibility
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 of the lawmakers.
To begin
 with, governments have
power
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 to impose
laws
 to
preservation
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the preservation
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 of
environment
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the environment
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. They can
introudce
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introduce
 harsh
laws
 to set limits for air pollution from factories and cars.
Additionally
, they can implement
laws
 to reduce deforestation in
order
protect
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 natural resources .
Also
, governments can impose taxes
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garbage
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the garbage
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 in
order
 to deter
people
 to make too much
waste
.
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Moreover
, governments can launch educational campaigns in
order
 to raise
awarenss
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awareness
 among
public
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the public
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 about
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the improtance
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improtance
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importance
 of
protect
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ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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.
For example
, the UK government organize several educational
program
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 in schools and workplaces to encourage
people
 to
recycling
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the
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waste
.
To sum up
, From my perspective , the government is fully responsible to protect
environment
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the environment
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 because they have
power
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the power
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 to impose strict
laws
 and
rasie
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raise
 awareness among
public
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the public
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 via
organize
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education
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 campaigns.
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