Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.
Mr Bean
My name is Francisco Gonzalez, I am writing to you
due to
the road in front of my house is damaged. I live in the middle of the city, where tourists come every day. I intended to contact you a lot of times to suggest you arrange the floor of the way.
Sometimes I see cars broke
their wheels Wrong verb form
break
due to
the state of the pounds. For the tourists
it is awful because spoils the beauty of the architecture of the landscape. Add a comma
,tourists
As well as
the locals in the zone miss profits for
this
reason.
In my opinion
I consider that the ways should be arranged for the welfare of people who live around. Add a comma
,opinion
This
issue can't be ignored, and I suggest contracting a company of building that could solve this
problem and
I looking forward to your answer.
Faithfully, Francisco Gonzalez.Correct word choice
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
