You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir/Mam, My name is Georgia , I am a regular reader of your newspaper, I really like your section that includes information on various geographical areas and their importance. Today I am writing to you

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my dissatisfaction with the inaccurate ,information you included about my hometown Doraha in your 52252nd edition.

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, I appreciate the efforts that you have

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there and

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all the detailed data about my place, but I want you to correct it as well. In the passage you have mentioned, our village is surrounded by two famous water bodies,

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we have three in reality.

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, you have not included the southwest in your article.

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, I want to inform you about it as it is a very important tourist attraction

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our area. In fact, in a certain period of the year, migratory birds visit here, which enhances the beauty of nature.

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, I would be glad if you could re-publish a similar article with a reference to the previous one, it would clarify the issue as well. Thanks for your consideration and I

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you will work on my suggestion. Yours faithfully, Georgia Henry.