There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work.
Nowadays, it is often argued that individuals have a burden to achieve higher degrees, so to mitigate
this
issue, the majority of people have thought that non-academic subjects Linking Words
such
as physical education and cooking courses should be eliminated from the school level. Linking Words
As a result
, they might focus on their study fields. I completely disagree with Linking Words
this
opinion and think that young students who are capable can perform better even if they do not have academic qualifications.
First of all, I believe that people who have successfully completed academics have similar career prospects to that of non-academic holders. There are lots of men and women in Linking Words
this
world who have been granted higher education degrees but still many of them are unemployed. Linking Words
However
, having a skill and talent in a certain task leads anyone towards success. Linking Words
For instance
, Santosh Shah from Nepal was declared the second runner-up of "BBC MasterChef 2020", which was held in the UK. Later, he came back to Nepal and opened a couple of restaurants in Kathmandu, serving varieties of Nepalese cuisines Linking Words
as well as
other global dishes. Linking Words
Thus
, despite not being from a scholarly background his cooking skills lead him to achieve his goals.
Linking Words
Secondly
, doing what you like keeps you motivated and Linking Words
therefore
leads to career growth. Linking Words
In other words
, whoever has a degree in a certain field but if they are not happy with their job Linking Words
then
they feel tense, Linking Words
this
person won't enjoy his life. Linking Words
Additionally
, preferences distinct Linking Words
accordingly
from person to person and they are not equally talented, so during school hours the pupils who are better in their academics should pursue their interests and those who are keen on sports or cookey can work Linking Words
accordingly
. Linking Words
For example
, there are well-known football players in the world who are not well-educated but they have accomplished their mission by only being involved in physical education or training. That's why there are several future options for scholars rather than being dependent on academics.
Linking Words
To conclude
, I strongly believe that the young ones should not be given more emphasis on their academic studies Linking Words
instead
they should be given the option to choose between different alternatives available Linking Words
such
as physical fitness training or sports, cooking classes and so on.Linking Words
Submitted by suneel22.sn on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?