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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do something about the problem, while others believe that effective action can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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Human activities lead to drawbacks for
plants
 and animal species. Some
people
 argue that doing something about
this
 issue seems too late, other
people
 argue that if we can find some effective ways, it would more likely be addressed. First, the main reason why some
people
 believe that preserving nature resources is too late is associated with the time-consuming. Human activities involve many, especially one related to the destruction of forests.
For example
,
people
 were logging the amount of trees in order to build houses or other furniture,
this
 leads to
animals
 and
plants
 losing their habitats, driving them to they are unable to survive. They believe that re-plant trees are time-consuming, and needs time to cultivate
,
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 because the
plants
 are unable to grow and only need one night or a few days.
However
, there are some solutions that can be taken into consideration. Imagine those kinds of
animals
 and
plants
 can be transferred into artificial preservation area. Once the forests recovered, those who can change their places. Another solution is related to warming
people
 do not log trees in the forests or hills by setting up a sign in natural places. By doing
this
 way, it can remind
people
 to take care of
animals
 or
plants
 when they are climbing the mountains. From my perspective, I completely agree that we can adopt a preservation area and warming signs to address
this
 issue. It is not late to fix
this
 problem. In conclusion,
although
 planting flora is a time-consuming way, we still can try our efforts to protect
animals
 and
plants
 that lose their habitats from human activities.
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