The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps compare the changes
of
the Change preposition
in
area
in
Stokeford in 1930 with that of 2010.
Generally speaking, the residence Change preposition
of
area
expanded and farmland was
disappeared. The gardens were Unnecessary verb
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changes
to Wrong verb form
changed
be
the retirement home and Unnecessary verb
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houses
.
As is given illustration, in 1930 the residence area
was below the bridge, combined with shops, the post office and the primary school. There was a large area
for farming in the north eastern
of the map and the Correct your spelling
northeastern
south western
. 80 years after, the villagers built their Correct your spelling
southwestern
houses
along the road to the south,
and Remove the comma
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also
built more road
to expand the house Fix the agreement mistake
roads
area
. The agriculture
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agricultural
area
was disappeared and some of that area
altered to be houses
. The shops in the village were changed to houses
. The post office and primary school were still the same place, moreover
, the school was bigger.
What is more, in 1930, there was
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were
the
gigantic gardens Correct article usage
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in
the east side of the village. Inside its Change preposition
on
area
there were Add a comma
,area
the
large Correct article usage
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houses
. In 2010, houses
and the
retirement home were built Correct article usage
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instead
of the
gardens.Correct article usage
apply
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