The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 2008 to 2016

The bar graph illustrates the information about the gross domestic product produced by the IT sector and service industry in the United Kingdom over the period of 2008 to 2016.

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, the chart is enough to make it clear the percentile of

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increased in the IT and Industry region from 2008 to 2016. Having skimmed and scanned the graphical representation,

it is clear that

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the percentage of

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in the IT sector in the

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2008 was 6.1%which increased sharply by 8.1 in the

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2010 and remained constant in 2012 at 7.9% which rapidly increased by the 12

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year

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2014.,Afterward the percentage of the

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graphically increased by 14.4

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2016. Turning towards the rest of the information the percentage of

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in the service sector in the

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2008 was 4%which

also

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increased by 6.2

%in

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the

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2010.After ,that it rapidly increased by 7.1

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2012.,Afterward it sharply increased by 7.8%and

finally

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it moderately increased by 8.1in the

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2016

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