Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Music
plays a crucial part in our daily life. We all know that music
is a universal language and it could bring people
with various backgrounds together, such
as people
with different cultures and ages.
Music
could be understood by people
from different cultures or ages because the feelings it conveys could be sympathized by almost all human beings. The rhythms of many world-famous songs, like Jasmine, are loved and enjoyed all around the world even though people
do not understand its lyrics. Therefore
, this
sympathy draws people
closer. In our daily life, it is never surprising to hear a story in which people
became good friends even lovers just because of a beautiful melody they both appreciate.
Music
could break through man-made barriers between countries. It is common that misunderstanding and controversy occur
from time to time in the world. Fix the infinitive
to occur
However
, the purposes and meanings of different governments could be conveyed through music
, to be specific, concerts. Maybe that is
why concerts held by foreign singers, bands, and orchestras always go along with
important diplomatic events. In addition
, the performances by folk artists in foreign countries enforce communication among people
all around the world. Some world-famous songs or melodies are sent into outer space, just signalling the creatures far beyond the universe the kindness of we human beings on earth.
In conclusion, music
is not only the most beautiful language but also
the most intelligible way for people
to communicate. If you are free, enjoy touching melodies and sense the feelings and emotions in them.Submitted by 287020651 on
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