Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Music
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plays a crucial part in our daily life. We all know that
music
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is a universal language and it could bring
people
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with various backgrounds together,
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as
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with different cultures and ages.
Music
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could be understood by
people
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from different cultures or ages because the feelings it conveys could be sympathized by almost all human beings. The rhythms of many world-famous songs, like Jasmine, are loved and enjoyed all around the world even though
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do not understand its lyrics.
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,
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sympathy draws
people
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closer. In our daily life, it is never surprising to hear a story in which
people
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became good friends even lovers just because of a beautiful melody they both appreciate.
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could break through man-made barriers between countries. It is common that misunderstanding and controversy
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from time to time in the world.
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, the purposes and meanings of different governments could be conveyed through
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, to be specific, concerts. Maybe
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why concerts held by foreign singers, bands, and orchestras always go
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important diplomatic events.
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, the performances by folk artists in foreign countries enforce communication among
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all around the world. Some world-famous songs or melodies are sent into outer space, just signalling the creatures far beyond the universe the kindness of we human beings on earth. In conclusion,
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is not only the most beautiful language but
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the most intelligible way for
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to communicate. If you are free, enjoy touching melodies and sense the feelings and emotions in them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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