The presented pie chart illustrates the household spending of Japanese and Malaysian in 2010.
The supplied illustrations of pie charts
represents
the amount of household Change the verb form
represent
spendings
in two different countries by 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
in Japan people spend most on Linking Words
housings
, Fix the agreement mistake
housing
while
for Linking Words
Malaysian
population other goods and services are in priority, Correct article usage
the Malaysian
Linking Words
moreover
it is interesting to note that for both countries food is the Add a comma
,moreover
last
thing on what they would spend moneyLinking Words
.
As can be seen in the diagram Japanese society spend most on Change preposition
on.
housings
(29%), health care (24%) and Fix the agreement mistake
housing
on
other goods and services (21%). Meanwhile, food and transport together take Change preposition
apply
roughly
Change preposition
up roughly
one quarter
of the chart.Add a hyphen
one-quarter
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