in many countries today, crime novel and TV crime dramas are becomig more and more popular. why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? what is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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these days, The number of crime

movies

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or crime stories is dramatically increasing.

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essay will analyze the major causes of why people tend to read

these kind

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of books or watch these categories of serials

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my view about crime programs. People prefer to watch action

movies

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case serials or flick have

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high score

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IMDB because in these

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, a viewer can see guns or unusual scenes

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they have

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amazing story

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young population pay money to buy a ticket for

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category from the cinema and directors find out they can be wealthy more easily through

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people are reluctant to watch scary

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they want to see something more real. Second families want to be aware of how a teenager or adult man can be a murderer or thief. in these novels, a reader can feel the steps of being a killer, they show poverty or lack of attention, how will make a stranger, police advise

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to read documents related to illegal life

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parents can grow better children in the future. In my idea thief fiction are so fantastic,

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the rate of

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our snatching

is rising every day so we should know how to defend our wallet from stealer.

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, I learn many things from real stories of killers, I understand most of them were not

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, They just lost their control when they became angry. I decided to talk with a psychologist once a month to control myself in stressful situations. By way of conclusion ,It appears to me that gangster

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are fantastic and they have more fans than other serials and teach us many things.

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in many countries today, crime novel and TV crime dramas are becomig more and more popular. why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? what is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Some pp believe that public buildings should be moved out ò the city to promote citizen's well being and better economic growing, while some argue that the planning will cause more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with others through the internet. But others are against it. Do you think this is a positive trend or a negative trend?