the chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.

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represents the data collected about

coffee

and

tea

consumption in

Sydney

,

Melbourne

, Brisbane,

Adelaide

and

Hobart

in Australia in

past

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4 weeks.

Overall

, most of the Australian

citizens

in these 5 cities went to a

cafe

for buying or drinking

coffee

or

tea

while

, buying fresh

coffe

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coffee

had the lowest percentage among

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Australians. During

last

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4 weeks in the given country, most

of

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people

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the people

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bought their

coffe

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coffee

or

tea

from a

cafe

,

for example

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citizens

of

Melbourne

,

Hobart

and

Sydney

consumed over 60% of their

coffee

or

tea

from a

cafe

. Followed by Brisbane’s

citizens

, 55% of

people

in the city bought their needed

coffee

or

tea

from a

cafe

and in

Adelaide

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the percentage of

people

buying their drinks from

cafe

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was a little bit lower than instant

coffee

consumption by 50%. The second rank in the chart belongs to

consumption

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of instant

coffee

in

Hobart

, Brisbane,

Adelaide

,

Melbourne

and

Sydney

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respectively recording about 55%, 53%, 50%, 48% and 45%.

Finally

, in the

last

spot,

less

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citizens

bought fresh

coffee

or

tea

.

Citizens

of

Sydney

and

Melbourne

bought over 40% of their needed

coffee

or

tea

fresh

while

less than 40% of

people

in

Hobart

,

Adelaide

and Brisbane bought fresh

coffee

or

tea

.