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some indiviguals believe that is a guided tour with gtoup is the best method to travel, while others think there are another better opstions for travaling. I totally agree with those how say there is no better way than guided tours.

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 years. some indiviguals believe that  is a guided tour with gtoup is the best method to travel,
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 others think there are another better opstions for travaling. I totally agree with those how say there is no better way than guided tours. Some of the community strongly believe that there are some different advantages
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, I would strongly argue that one of the most essential benefit of having guide when travelling is that may save planty of time. The mean reasone given is that planning for a trep or a vacation can really be time consuming because there is a lot of things need to be booked and arraned. To illustrate, booking flight, hotels, and tickets.
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