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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is freedom of speech

#freedom #speech
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is freedom of speech. Now people are beginning to realize
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how paramount to express
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 thoughts in
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 society. Personally, I tend to that’s the way it is .
Firstly
, it is well known that in
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century
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 it is effortless to announce ideas. One of
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 reasons behind
that is
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 a right to vote or asses their right either have equality of voice between males and females.
For
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Politician
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politicians
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: governments or
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 speak in public places
make
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the
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commitments or plans to develop the country .
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 audience
listen
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 to them thoroughly and patiently to
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 approval in the form of
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 to win.
On the other hand
, it can
also
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 social media . Nowadays it is like
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 weapon, you can write about all
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.Take
for
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economy
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 problems or environmental disasters and
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of
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 that, either you can write comments and offer ideas.
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 number of people
self conscious
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 to deliberate in public .
Hence
 they do it
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 social media . In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that all people
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 rights and especially freedom of speech.
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