The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The given chart illustrates the steps involved in the recycling of
cans
made of aluminium.
Overall
, the process is split into 7 stages, commencing with throwing the used cans
in the bins and concluding with the reusing stage.
Firstly
, the used cans
are thrown into the dumpsters. Furthermore
, those containers are collected, hence
, this
part is called the collection stage. Thereafter
, the cans
obtained are cleaned, sorted, and then
shredded and this
is followed by compressing the aluminium structures.
Secondly
, the metal is heated and then
brought to a molten state so that it could be rolled into 2.5mm - 6mm thick strips.
Lastly
, the rolls are sent for recycling which is moulded in the shape of cans
. Afterwards, the product is reused, and about 74% of the part utilized in the UK is recycled.Submitted by poonam.tushir0099 on
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