The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The two pie charts give information about the percentages of
energy
consumption
in an average Australian household and the proportion
of greenhouse
gas
emissions
released by each energy
consumption
.
Overall
, it is clear that
heating and water
heating have the biggest share
among Australian household energy
use, while
the consumption
of cooling stands last
. Moreover
, the largest proportion
of greenhouse
gas
emissions
allocates to water
heating, followed by other appliances.
The first pie chart shows that the share
of heating is the biggest consumption
of Australian household energy
usage with almost half of all share
. Water
heating ranks second with 30%, and other appliances have a considerable figure
among energy
usage (15%). Furthermore
, the figure
for lighting and cooling together is almost the same as that for refrigeration by a narrow margin of 7%.
The biggest proportion
of greenhouse
gas
emissions
accounts for water
heating with about one-third of all share
. Other appliances have a substantial figure
in greenhouse
gas
emissions
with 28%. There is little difference between the figure
for heating and refrigeration, the figure
for the former is 15%. Although
cooling ranks last
with 3%, the share
of lighting in greenhouse
gas
emission is considerable with approximately one-tenth of all proportion
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