The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The two pie charts give information about the percentages of
energy
Use synonyms
consumption
in an average Australian household and the Use synonyms
proportion
of Use synonyms
greenhouse
Use synonyms
gas
Use synonyms
emissions
released by each Use synonyms
energy
Use synonyms
consumption
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
heating and Linking Words
water
heating have the biggest Use synonyms
share
among Australian household Use synonyms
energy
use, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
consumption
of cooling stands Use synonyms
last
. Linking Words
Moreover
, the largest Linking Words
proportion
of Use synonyms
greenhouse
Use synonyms
gas
Use synonyms
emissions
allocates to Use synonyms
water
heating, followed by other appliances.
The first pie chart shows that the Use synonyms
share
of heating is the biggest Use synonyms
consumption
of Australian household Use synonyms
energy
usage with almost half of all Use synonyms
share
. Use synonyms
Water
heating ranks second with 30%, and other appliances have a considerable Use synonyms
figure
among Use synonyms
energy
usage (15%). Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
figure
for lighting and cooling together is almost the same as that for refrigeration by a narrow margin of 7%.
The biggest Use synonyms
proportion
of Use synonyms
greenhouse
Use synonyms
gas
Use synonyms
emissions
accounts for Use synonyms
water
heating with about one-third of all Use synonyms
share
. Other appliances have a substantial Use synonyms
figure
in Use synonyms
greenhouse
Use synonyms
gas
Use synonyms
emissions
with 28%. There is little difference between the Use synonyms
figure
for heating and refrigeration, the Use synonyms
figure
for the former is 15%. Use synonyms
Although
cooling ranks Linking Words
last
with 3%, the Linking Words
share
of lighting in Use synonyms
greenhouse
Use synonyms
gas
emission is considerable with approximately one-tenth of all Use synonyms
proportion
.Use synonyms
Submitted by behzad.tahmouresi on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, consumption, proportion, greenhouse, gas, emissions, water, share, figure with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
▼