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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

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I have always believed that tests or
exams
 are the most common way to evaluate a
student
's
performance
. Course assignments and the project are not enough
due to
 the fact that the examination is an evaluation of the
student
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overall
performance
,
exams
 have uncertainties, and
students
 should be able to work under pressure.
To begin
 with, examinations only occur after certain times of learning. Usually appears to be interim or final
exams
. They aim to find out the
student
's
performance
 on various topics or subjects.
For example
, some
students
 perform well in math
while
 others are weak at math but they could be more stenchful in another subject.
Therefore
test
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 is the most effective way to evaluate the
student
 for
overall
performance
. Another advantage of
exams
 is the uncertainty. course works are usually given the frames to work on.
Exams
 are top secret before the moment you received the
test
 questions.
For example
,
students
 working on an assignment or project they could access to
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wide range of sources
such
 as Internet sources. If
this
 applies to
exams
 and tests it will be considered as plagiarism, which is serious academic misconduct.
Students
 should be able to work under pressure.
Test
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 play the most important role in academic
performance
due to
 the fact that
exams
 have a higher weight in the percentile for course grades and
test
 has not allowance for mistakes, if you are wrong you have no chance to argue. ,
Furthermore
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 time limits are given for
exams
. The aforementioned factor applies plentiful pressure on
students
.
Therefore
, in order to achieve higher scores on the exam. They need to stay highly concentrated and be precise in every answer.
To conclude
, examinations will always be the most efficient way to measure
students
' academic
performance
. Because of the requirement
overall
 strength, uncertainties in
exams
 and zero forgiveness and limited time for every question.
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