The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where

relevant.
The process depiction the production stages of how instant
noodles
being
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are
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made.
Overall
, Instant
noodles
made with
main
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raw materials which
is
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are; Flour from the truck, and water and oil after the Silos storage. The process
include
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eight steps starting with the input materials and
mixer
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mixing
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it
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them
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and how it
being
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cooked and dried ending with what
flavor
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flavour
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added
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inside the
cups
and labelling it. Instant
noodles
manufacturing
start
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with, adding and mixing the silos and water and oil. the rollers between step 3 to 4 helps the mixer to move dough sheets and strips to be put inside discs in stage 5, being ready to cook and dry. After the cooked
noodles
in stage 6, the product will be inside
cups
where the vegetables and spices
added
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inside the
cups
. Leading to the final step
labelling
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and sealing the
cups
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cup
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rollers to
the labels stage
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the label's stage
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and finishing with sealing and being ready to use and storage.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, cups with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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