The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process depiction the production stages of how instant
noodles
being
made.
Wrong verb form
are
Overall
, Instant noodles
made with main
raw materials which Correct article usage
the main
is
are; Flour from the truck, and water and oil after the Silos storage. The process Change the verb form
are
include
eight steps starting with the input materials and Change the verb form
includes
mixer
Replace the word
mixing
it
and how it Correct pronoun usage
them
being
cooked and dried ending with what Change the form of the verb
is
flavor
Change the spelling
flavour
added
inside the Add a missing verb
is added
cups
and labelling it.
Instant noodles
manufacturing start
with, adding and mixing the silos and water and oil. the rollers between step 3 to 4 helps the mixer to move dough sheets and strips to be put inside discs in stage 5, being ready to cook and dry.
After the cooked Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
noodles
in stage 6, the product will be inside cups
where the vegetables and spices added
inside the Add a missing verb
are added
cups
. Leading to the final step labelling
and sealing the Change preposition
of labelling
cups
rollers to Change the noun form
cup
the labels stage
and finishing with sealing and being ready to use and storage.Change to a genitive case
the label's stage
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