The charts shows the performance of sector wise indices in india from 2008 to 2018.

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The given line graph depicts the information regarding the performance of

regions wise

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indication in India over a period of

years

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starting from 2008 to 2018.The data has been calibrated in millions.

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,the graph is enough to make it clear that all the sectors showed gains over the past ten

years

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on the graph.

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,real estate and information technology were outperformers over other sectors. Having skimmed and scanned the graphical representation, it is crystal clear that in sectors,the information technology was at the index of 600 in 2008 but got decreased to 400 indices in 2010 and unfortunately took a high rise towards 1000 indicator and reached 1100 index in the year of 2010.

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,consumer goods have the highest indication among others beginning at 900in 2008.After many fluctuations in

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years

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,it peaked to1050 index only in 2018.

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real estate was the lowest standing indicator at 200in 2008.For, 3

years

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it was constant and suddenly it took a rose and reach

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900indices in 2018.Meanwhile, pharmaceuticals

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steadily growing from 700 to 1000 in the year 2008 to 2018 respectively.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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The charts shows the performance of sector wise indices in india from 2008 to 2018.

There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre.

Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, children should be free to enjoy their life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that Olympics games are exciting events that bring othet nations together. Others say Olympics is a waste of money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Some people feel that school should teach children how to be good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What skills people need to be a good parent?

Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.