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The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#poverty #countries #six #years #education #numbers
Giving
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to get free education and getting essential
skills
 are very beneficial for Individuals, especially in terms of reducing
poverty
 among
population
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the population
a population
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 of any country.
However
, I think that it is not enough and
government
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the government
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 should
also
 propose more working places for
people
. On the one hand, getting free
knowledge
 of how to read, write and calculate can boost someone's potential and
person
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a person
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 can find a
work place
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workplace
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 and start
earn
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earning
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 a living. These
skills
 are considered as a basis and
people
 getting them
while
 studying in school, so everyone
shoul
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should
 know them.
Therefore
, if everyone is acquainted with
this
knowledge
 it is hard to find a
job
.
Job
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The job
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 market is very competitive nowadays and
usually
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,usually
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 the
work place
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workplace
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 is given to a person who
have
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has
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 had an experience in the industry or who have had
a
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apply
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strong and very accurate
knowledge
 which is required for a
job
. But what can
person
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a person
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 with only essential
skills
can
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apply
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do in
this
 situation? The expansion of
job
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the job
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 market comes into a field. If
government
 gives more opportunities
for
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to
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people
 with only basic
skills
, it is much easier to reduce
poverty
 in a country.
For instance
,
developing
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by developing
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 and concentrating on
specific
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a specific
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 area or a region with
lack
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a lack
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 of
work
 opportunities,
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the
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government
 can increase
work force
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workforce
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 of
population
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the population
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.
Moreover
, there will be
the
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a
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 fall
of
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in
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people
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the people
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 who live under the line of
poverty
. Giving places to
work
 that require less
knowledge
 and no experience can boost
economy
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the economy
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 of a region and everyone will have a beneficial impact.
To conclude
, giving a free education that requires no fees can have a great influence on
people
,
however
government
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the government
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 should
also
 increase places for getting a
job
 to decrease
a
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the
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 level of
poverty
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • poverty alleviation
  • functional literacy
  • numeracy skills
  • educational opportunity
  • employment prospects
  • critical thinking
  • empowerment
  • inequality reduction
  • sustainable development
  • innovation
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