Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Ither people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Education is a vital aspect of
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. The
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that we teach to our youth in the schools, determine the courses of action we take in the future as a collective. There has always been a recurring debate that has divided the public into two groups; one group states that in today’s world,
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like
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and
Technology
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are more important than
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like
history
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or
humanities
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in general,
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the opposing group,
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favor
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history
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and other
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of
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over
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and
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and believe that the school system should focus more on these
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. In
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text, I am going to discuss both of these points of
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and state why I think it is better to hold both of these
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high importance.
People
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who prefer to put more
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and
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courses in school curricula have a lot of reasons for their belief, but they
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highlighted one reason as their major one;
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and
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are the
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of
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society
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and able
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students to help
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improve their way of living and to move faster towards the futuristic ideals in terms of technological advancements.
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, a period of time where the focus was put on mostly on
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and
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was the beginning of the 20th century, which not only resulted in
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increase in the number of inventions
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but
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encouraged
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to be more creative and move towards a better future in a faster pace. On the other side of the debate,
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hold
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belief that teaching
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and
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should be the main objective in students’ classes in today’s
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. The main ground, on which they base their opinion, is the belief that the main thing that lacks in humanity, is
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humanity itself.
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,
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are too focused on the materialistic and technological aspects of life and
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, to the point that advancements in these areas are considered inevitable; but
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have forgotten
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roots and bases of their philosophy which shaped their whole identity as an individual.
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, it is vital for schools to emphasize
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subjects
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like
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and philosophy (or other
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subjects
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for that matter) in order to restore the absent insight in the minds of students. Personally, I believe that it goes beyond just black and white, and
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should avoid taking sides in
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particular matter. Both of these
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can go hand in hand in schools;
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and
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the students’ minds, and
history
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and
humanities
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shape the students’ identity as an individual, and together, they help students shape a better life for all of us as a
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. In conclusion, the rivalry between
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and
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is everything but productive.
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,
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should focus on resolving the concurrent issues in the world by having an interdisciplinary approach to life.
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