The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries in 1999 and 2004.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries in 1999 and 2004.
The two tables compare the
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and
bananas
in two years (1999 and 2004) in five different European countries.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the figure for
sales
of
coffee
in Denmark is the most in 1999,
while
that for Sweden is the
last
and the United Kingdom has the largest
sales
of
coffee
in 2004.
Moreover
,
Switzerland
allocates the biggest
sales
in 1999 and the UK
sales
stand first in 2004. In 1999, the figure for
sales
of
coffee
and
bananas
in
Switzerland
stood first with 1.5 and 15
million
euros
respectively, and
also
there was a wide disparity between the figure for
sales
of
bananas
in
Switzerland
and the other four countries
while
the latest was Belgium with 0.6
million
euros
. In 2004, the most
sales
accounted for the UK in
coffee
and
bananas
with 20 and 5.5 respectively, followed by
Switzerland
with 6 and 4.7
million
euros
respectively.
Although
Denmark stood
last
with 0.9
million
euros
in
bananas
sales
,
this
country had considerable
sales
of
coffee
with 2
million
euros
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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