The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries in 1999 and 2004.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries in 1999 and 2004.
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The two tables compare the
sales
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of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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in two years (1999 and 2004) in five different European countries.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the figure for
sales
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of
coffee
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in Denmark is the most in 1999,
while
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that for Sweden is the
last
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and the United Kingdom has the largest
sales
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of
coffee
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in 2004.
Moreover
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,
Switzerland
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allocates the biggest
sales
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in 1999 and the UK
sales
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stand first in 2004. In 1999, the figure for
sales
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of
coffee
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and
bananas
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in
Switzerland
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stood first with 1.5 and 15
million
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euros
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respectively, and
also
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there was a wide disparity between the figure for
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of
bananas
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in
Switzerland
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and the other four countries
while
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the latest was Belgium with 0.6
million
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euros
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. In 2004, the most
sales
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accounted for the UK in
coffee
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and
bananas
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with 20 and 5.5 respectively, followed by
Switzerland
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with 6 and 4.7
million
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euros
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respectively.
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Denmark stood
last
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with 0.9
million
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euros
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in
bananas
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sales
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,
this
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country had considerable
sales
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of
coffee
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with 2
million
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euros
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, switzerland, million, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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