You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given line graph illustrates how much
banana
coast in four countries (Japan,France,Germany and
USA
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the USA
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) over 1 decade period from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Japan and France's
banana
coast witnessed some fluctuations
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and an
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an
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a
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significant increase
at the end
of the period,
while
Germany's and USA
banana
's prices were approximately stable throughout the period. regarding
banana
's price per kilogram in Japan, It started at 2.00
dollars
per kilogram in 1994, After that It rose sharply to around 2.9
dollars
in 1995.
Following
this
, the figure fell slightly to 1.9 in 1997.
Then
it decreased rapidly to reach around 1.6 in 2001. and
at the
end
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,end
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it experienced a considerable growth to 2,50
dollars
at the end
.
while
France saw a stable trend of
banana
prices to 1.7
dollars
from 1994 to 1997. followed by a sharp decrease in 2000 and 2003 .
then
it showed a slight increase to approximately 1.55
dollars
in 2004 .
on the other hand
, both countries GERMANY and USA were relatively approached in
banana
price. in 1994
banana
cost was 0.99 and 1.4 in both countries respectively and the fee experienced some fluctuations in both states from 1995 to 2003. followed by stable cost to 1.1 and 1.3 from 2003 to 2004 respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words banana, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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