Write a letter to your friend who lives in a different country about your plan to work overseas. In your letter explain: What jobs do you plan to do? Why do you want to work overseas? Ask for some information related to jobs, such as salary, working hours and so on

Dear John, How are you? I hope you are doing splendidly. I need your suggestion regarding an important decision in my life. I hope you will help me and guide me to the right option. As you know, I recently completed my IT in the plumbing field. One of my classmates told me that it is an in-demand
job
in Canada. So, I can easily get a
job
in
this
field with a good wage. I am planning to move there for my good future because you are already aware of the
job
system and pay rate in India. Even after completing graduation, it is really hard for the general category to get a
job
to cater for their amenities. If I will get a
job
in Canada,
then
I can handle my own expenses. I want to ask you some basic questions like what is the minimum wage right now, and what are the working hours for
this
job
. Is there any restriction by the Government on hours for foreign workers? What are the other challenges that someone has to deal with after immigrating to a developed country? Can you please help me with the accommodation and trade search because I don't have any other contact in Toronto? I will wait for your reply. Warm wishes,  Dhillon
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exciting news
  • explore new opportunities
  • pursue a career
  • invaluable international work experience
  • expand my professional network
  • connect with professionals
  • different cultures and backgrounds
  • immerse myself in a new culture
  • gain a broader perspective on life
  • job opportunities
  • average salary range
  • working hours
  • working conditions
  • marketing industry
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