The table below shows key data on the demographics of four different countries.
The table illustrates master data about demographics in
China
, Russia, Unit States
, and Unit Kingdom
.
Overall
, China
has more population than Unit Kingdom
, In contrast
, the GDP per Capita in the USA have a huge amount among them and with the average Life expectancy they have almost the Same numbers.
initially
, china
is the biggest number of people at 1.359,000.0ah world, after
this
the United States
was numbered 318.875.000 it
is Second place in the population. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, the United States
is a larger figure in GDP per Capita than China
at 53.000 and 6.809, While
China
is the least among all countries.
On the other hand
, Russia and the United Kingdom
have less population with 143.986.000 and 64.939.000, respectively. further
. Gop per capita ave 42.000 and 15.000 approximately. Finally
, the average life expectancy the largest percentage is 81.5 in the United Kingdom
, and the smallest in the United States
at almost 69Submitted by Layla on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words china, states, kingdom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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