The line chart below shows the rates of deforestation in the Brazilian Amazon for the years 2008 to 2017 and the pie chart below shows the causes for deforestation in the Brazilian Amazon for the same years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the rates of deforestation in the Brazilian Amazon for the years 2008 to 2017 and the pie chart below shows the causes for deforestation in the Brazilian Amazon for the same years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts how many areas were deforested in the Amazon in Brazil from 2008 to 2017 and the pie chart illustrates the reasons for the
deforestation
in the same years period.
Overall
, the number of
deforestation
areas had a gradual downward trend and the reason for deforesting was varied. In terms of the rates of
deforestation
in the Brazilian Amazon, to start with the peak of the highest number of areas at 34.000km2 in 2008 and steadily decreased to 17.000km2 in 2012 with fluctuations.
However
, the proportion of
deforestation
suddenly spiked up to 30.000km2 in 2013,
whereas
the Brazilian Amazon faced a continuous decline in rates of
deforestation
until the end of the year period with a small rise at 6.000km2 in 2017.
According to
the data given in the pie graph, the main cause of
deforestation
was agriculture both large and small scales, which accounted for more than half of the total, with small-holder agriculture at 35% and large-scale agriculture at 20%.
Following
this
, a quarter of the
deforestation
reason made up for cow’s ranch, the forest woods were used for logging with 15%, and an unknown other reason occupied 5%.
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