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Some people think it is better to live in the city while others say the countryside is better. Discuss both attributes and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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It is believed by a number of individuals that living in urban
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 of villages is far better. In
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 essay both views will be discussed, as living in bigger cities or in a small town have its own benefits.
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 with, because of higher wage job opportunities in big cities,
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 tend to migrate to earn more and live a good quality of life.
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, a recent survey showed that the per capita income of
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 living in Vancouver is 2 times higher than those in backward
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 there are higher costs of living in
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, these economic benefits still attract a lot of
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 to live there.
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, the peaceful and pollution-free environment in the countryside
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 helps to reduce health issues.
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, there are no hectic schedules which is why
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 living in villages have enough time to spend with their family and friends.
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 higher natural vegetation contributes to a stress-free lifestyle.
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,
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 living in either area small or large town be prone to attain different types of ease which makes their lifestyle better than each other.
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, health is the key element over wealth.
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, a healthy lifestyle outweighs the advantage of high-earning places.
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