Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is
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common belief that speaking is the stronger form of
communication
compared to writing through an email or letter. Many have
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counterarguments
and
list
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of the benefits of written
communication
. Speaking from my experience, I have to agree completely
due to
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body
languages
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and the flow of a conversation. Those who
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in favour of the direct way of
communication
point out the trait
that is
entirely unique to speaking in person to person, which is the way your body behaves when you are communicating. To be more concise, a person’s
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like scratching their nose or playing with their hair can tell you many aspects about them
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you can’t see only through words.
For instance
, many studies have shown that people can tell
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mood
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through things like the twitch of an
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eyebrow
or how large the pupil is. It is wise to say that body languages are unique and beneficial traits that are exclusive to only spoken
languagues
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languages
. When you are speaking to someone in Messenger or Instagram,
coversations
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conversations
are more often than not choppy which is not a problem for speaking face to face. The smoothness of
communication
is hindered by both parties not focusing because written
languagues
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language
don’t grab
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attention, if there is not a voice to remind a person to chat
then
many will forget and leave the conversation. An example can be seen in the phenomenon
“ghosting”
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which is prevalent in the youth’s internet culture, teens will leave friends in the “read” status to surf tiktok or Snapchat leading to unfinished
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conversation
. We can assume that
this
is a detrimental flaw of
communication
through writing.
To conclude
, spoken languages have lots of pros over their writing counterpart. Writing is still an essential way of
communication
, but I believe that speaking is better in most situations.
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